Smooth Eve by efrazable
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Smooth Eve by efrazable
Yeah, it's short, but it's supposed to be. I have this collab with ___ going on, and this is the first track in my series to be scened by... ONE OF YOU! *dun-dun-dun*
Re: Smooth Eve by efrazable
That was enjoyable! Would be more impressive if it had more power. Nice job.
Helios Pavonine- Member
Re: Smooth Eve by efrazable
@Linerage- Oyez. Itlinerage wrote:Stall is quite awesome.
was some work.
Helios Pavonine wrote:That was enjoyable! Would be
more impressive if it had more power. Nice job.
@HP The purpose was to be
kinda smooth, going off of Sheldon's manual part in CF, and a little bit
of Silk Road by Ram Tzu. Thanks for the positive
feedback!
@bbshabob You won't know until January 2012.bbshabob1 wrote:im the first person to ask who this mystery
person is
Last edited by efrazable on Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:45 am; edited 1 time in total
Re: Smooth Eve by efrazable
let me start off by saying that the track was most definitely not bled XD more like bleen. or gled. or ruen. or something like that
as for the track, really creative use of green lines! The track did get pretty repetitive though, as it mainly went downward oscillating from left to right over and over 'til it was stalled at the end (the track was pretty short overall).
Next time, work on your direction and your power. otherwise great job!
as for the track, really creative use of green lines! The track did get pretty repetitive though, as it mainly went downward oscillating from left to right over and over 'til it was stalled at the end (the track was pretty short overall).
Next time, work on your direction and your power. otherwise great job!
pure5152- Member
Re: Smooth Eve by efrazable
I felt there was 2 things that you can greatly improve on
-Direction
-speed(or flow)
Its weird how it just went back and forth, and downward. Try to go in all different directions and such.
I felt the track was kinda slow. It would have been better if bosh was going a bit faster.
Just some things to keep in mind, nice job
-Direction
-speed(or flow)
Its weird how it just went back and forth, and downward. Try to go in all different directions and such.
I felt the track was kinda slow. It would have been better if bosh was going a bit faster.
Just some things to keep in mind, nice job
Re: Smooth Eve by efrazable
^^ seemed to be inspired by ram tzu's silk road, which pretty much did just that.
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Re: Smooth Eve by efrazable
^ not saying that Ram Tzu's track is the paragon of excellence here XD it had it's weaknesses
pure5152- Member
Re: Smooth Eve by efrazable
Style
7/10
This track has style which is stolen from a few people. However, that one backward tumbling curve was pretty stylish. I have to give you props for that.
Control
6/10
Control was rather mediocre in my opinion. I have very high expectations for control in xy. The stall was very controlled though.
Skill
8/10
You seem to have more and more skill with each track that you release. The xy was much better than any I have seen from you so far.
Fun
9/10
This track was very fun. That one backward rolling curve was very fun, I was actually surprised when I first saw it.
Overall
7/10
I decided to go with 7 rather than 8 because of the length, which I know is intentional. The track had some pretty deceptive moments. Next time go for more movement and try to make a loop or two. Other than that you are improving a lot with each track. Keep up the good work.
7/10
This track has style which is stolen from a few people. However, that one backward tumbling curve was pretty stylish. I have to give you props for that.
Control
6/10
Control was rather mediocre in my opinion. I have very high expectations for control in xy. The stall was very controlled though.
Skill
8/10
You seem to have more and more skill with each track that you release. The xy was much better than any I have seen from you so far.
Fun
9/10
This track was very fun. That one backward rolling curve was very fun, I was actually surprised when I first saw it.
Overall
7/10
I decided to go with 7 rather than 8 because of the length, which I know is intentional. The track had some pretty deceptive moments. Next time go for more movement and try to make a loop or two. Other than that you are improving a lot with each track. Keep up the good work.
Last edited by Sheldon on Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:12 pm; edited 1 time in total
Re: Smooth Eve by efrazable
A REVIEW!Sheldon wrote:Insert review here
EDIT: Thanks, I was expecting about a 5 or so, seeing you give scruff a nine. But thanks! Means a lot from you.
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