Line Rider - Evolution of Extreme

Hai guys, Here is a awesome track i made in beta 2... I spent a long time making this, so enjoy and please leave a comment about what you think .

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wem7ao58B9M

- Ikkel22/Nepau

wow that was very impressive

you have a lot of potential, keep it up ^^

Cool track man, you could work on your recording quite a bit, it seems a bit laggy. I'm not sure if we still have a faq about recording here around somewhere, but otherwise you could just ask around/post a topic about it in the help forum. There's also recording shops where people with crazy computers help other members out with recording tracks =)

I liked your shading in all the scenery btw, with your next tracks you should try out some new scenery types and maybe you'll be the next Techdawg someday

I'm really impressed with this
I'm glad to see some new blood in here giving scenery a shot. The track was insanely original and I like the variation of scenery you used.

If you keep the 2D style then you'll have a lot more fun than doing anything in 3D. 3D is over-rated. Afterall, the most memeroable and epic tracks were mostly in 2D. Not saying that they all were, but 3D can be unoriginal and a little over-doing it. I don't know if you know what I mean but just stick with 2D trust me you'll have a lot more fun

Hey you joined like I said you should Amazing track you have so much potential in you! Keep it up

Nice track and also cool that u joined the forum. keep making scened tracks!

Woah... this reminds me of what my scenery looked like back when I did scenery tracks!

Very old school shading,, I enjoyed it.

This is great for a beginner! I can tell you worked pretty hard on it.

Sometimes though, to get better you don't just need to do more work, you need to be more creative. Try to think more about how you scene things and what exactly you draw - most of these scenery techniques were pretty clearly copied from others.

Also, work on your recording. aspi33 has a great recording tutorial, you can find it in the tutorial section or by searching on youtube.

Finally, try to make the track more fast paced. This wasn't bad, but it was rather boring because the track was slowish. (It's also possible to have the scenery go by too fast, but you don't need to worry about that yet)

Most importantly though, keep making tracks! It's great to see new sceners in the green room

I really liked the beginning/intro titles - they felt professional, like you knew what you were doing

The track was good, didn't have much variation in tricks - try a tail manual or a gravity well.
And the scenery was decent, the shading was well done.

as other people have said, work on your recording.

Niiiiiice! But your title makes it sound like this is better than evolution of linerider, just saying

But wow! I really loved the scenery because it had some unique shading in there that nobody does, like the way you made those platforms sticking out of the edges ^^

I'm glad I see a scened track after a while. Not many people do scenery anymore, you know.

I loved it My only advice is: Keep practising and I'm sure you'll become better.

This good for a beginner though i'm not amused or impressed though it was a nice track to watch.

i actually really enjoyed this track simply because of the old style of scenery, lots of machine type stuff and pillars and cavern like buildings, really brings back the good ol memories. track too, simplistic and scenable yet still enjoyable.

anyway, your not quite the next ghosty, but you can get there with some simple improvements. great work, keep it up!!

Thank you all, for the good replies... I'll use the things you said to improve my linerider tracks

Oh wow, I'm impressed!
The curves at the start looked great, your shading was good, and near the bottom of the first "box" when you layered the curves with black and white, that looked fantastic too ^^ You had some pretty unique stuff in there and I really hope to see more from you

very good ! it reminds me of my beginnings , keep it up