Save The Princess - Sssschiller
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Georgio_jc
linerage
CamQuartr
Commandercoke
Sheldon
Cereal
Smitsy
Rafael
SETH
TigerXLine
Helios Pavonine
Wolf_Spirit
Sssschiller
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Save The Princess - Sssschiller
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q38SJAzZLl4
Hey guys! New Video. I tried to do the recording this time on my own and was surprised how hard it goes.
Also i didnt split the track to see how many lines my computer can run...bad idea!
Even though I hope u enjoy the track!
Hey guys! New Video. I tried to do the recording this time on my own and was surprised how hard it goes.
Also i didnt split the track to see how many lines my computer can run...bad idea!
Even though I hope u enjoy the track!
Sssschiller- Member
Re: Save The Princess - Sssschiller
Well then, I can say that I really enjoyed this track
The intro looked really good, very impressive.
Now the track itself, I was a little irritated at how bosh was at the left for the entire track =/ But anyways you mentioned how you hated recording so I'll leave that out. Your hills look awesome, you make them quite 3-D near the tops and that looks really effective. Your dragons also look really good, great shading on them too! The mountains in the back, you tried to use some new shading for them but I don't think they really looked amazing, especially with the cross-hatching, they didn't seem right for a mountain. The bones you used reminded me of phonolite scened. They looked really good and pretty much perfect ^^ Oh, I just noticed the little canine type thing, it looks really good, I love it! Near the end now it seems like you have quite a lot of imagination for scening as you're putting birds vs dragons :3 Also the fish at the bottom was just amazing, you did it perfectly and shaded it perfectly! Now we're done
One thing about the whole track, you used the same shading for almost everything, I'd like to see a little more of a veriety of shading in the track for things like trees or animals ^^
However overall you have a great talent and imagination for sceneing. I hope to see more from you as I think you are capable of quite a lot ^^ So +rep!
The intro looked really good, very impressive.
Now the track itself, I was a little irritated at how bosh was at the left for the entire track =/ But anyways you mentioned how you hated recording so I'll leave that out. Your hills look awesome, you make them quite 3-D near the tops and that looks really effective. Your dragons also look really good, great shading on them too! The mountains in the back, you tried to use some new shading for them but I don't think they really looked amazing, especially with the cross-hatching, they didn't seem right for a mountain. The bones you used reminded me of phonolite scened. They looked really good and pretty much perfect ^^ Oh, I just noticed the little canine type thing, it looks really good, I love it! Near the end now it seems like you have quite a lot of imagination for scening as you're putting birds vs dragons :3 Also the fish at the bottom was just amazing, you did it perfectly and shaded it perfectly! Now we're done
One thing about the whole track, you used the same shading for almost everything, I'd like to see a little more of a veriety of shading in the track for things like trees or animals ^^
However overall you have a great talent and imagination for sceneing. I hope to see more from you as I think you are capable of quite a lot ^^ So +rep!
Wolf_Spirit- Member
- Retired Admin
Re: Save The Princess - Sssschiller
Oh wow, you can be the new Sorvius one day.
I have nothing to criticize. I think I reached my limit of love today.
I have nothing to criticize. I think I reached my limit of love today.
Helios Pavonine- Member
Re: Save The Princess - Sssschiller
I loved every second of it!!!
The scenery was beast. It looks clean, easy and simple. The theme was perfect and all the snakes where done pretty good. You managed to keep the scenery at the same level through the whole track. Good job!
The track where also pretty good. It suits a scened track and it's slow effect fitted the music. Also nice granuals and flings
The music was amazing. It told me a sad story and it matched the track pretty well.
Great editing! Nice intro, btw. The recording was good. You viewed bosh in a strange way that turned out to be cool. I love that you showed us that bosh fell at the end. It really melted my heart Great slideshow at the end...
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Things that could have done this track even better:
- If you had synchronized the music to the track even more. Like on 0:56 when the music evolved, the track could have gone faster and more intense and maybe you could zoom in at this time aswell.
- Maybe fill out the white parts. I noticed some and thats okay, but if you could fill these out and still have a clean and simple track, it would be awesome
- Bigger monuments. I feel like this track needed a huge monument (a huge dragon for example). I think something like that would have taken the track to the next level. It would also have fitted the music pretty well (after my opinion).
Amazing track, Sssschiller! I think this deserves a feature. You should totally enter MOTM and maybe enter some of your screenies in LAOTW
TigerXLine- Member
- I used to play Line Rider and be weird.
Re: Save The Princess - Sssschiller
i love this track! theme is awesome, pretty good atmosphere with the musique !
Re: Save The Princess - Sssschiller
I really loved it. One thing really annoyed me though: The shading was the same almost everywhere. Try to use more variation when it's about shading. For the rest you did a GREAT job!
PS I can record it for you next time
PS I can record it for you next time
Rafael- Line Rider Legend
Re: Save The Princess - Sssschiller
Those mountains in the distance made me cry.
Work of art, +rep
Work of art, +rep
Smitsy- Member
Re: Save The Princess - Sssschiller
lolwtf? Why are you crying?
any who, I really enjoyed the scenery. Despite the meh recording, it was awesome.
You're style reminds me of a much more detailed version of kraettz.
+rep, keep making scenery tracks!
any who, I really enjoyed the scenery. Despite the meh recording, it was awesome.
You're style reminds me of a much more detailed version of kraettz.
+rep, keep making scenery tracks!
Cereal- Line Rider Legend
Re: Save The Princess - Sssschiller
Um Holy [I am a potty mouth] have rabid record your next track you are a beast at scenery
Re: Save The Princess - Sssschiller
Wow. That was savage, and beautiful. Your scenery is very stylized. At first, I agreed with everyone else about adding different shading, but I think the lack of different shading styles made this track what it is. And it is wonderful.
Commandercoke- Line Rider Legend
Re: Save The Princess - Sssschiller
wow, that was pretty badass.
Loved the theme, great idea.
The mountains in the background were awesome, the shadow work was fantastic!
Nicely done.
And i'll be willing to rerecord your track for you, if you want
Loved the theme, great idea.
The mountains in the background were awesome, the shadow work was fantastic!
Nicely done.
And i'll be willing to rerecord your track for you, if you want
Re: Save The Princess - Sssschiller
... Is it just me or is your background theme inspired by Dr.Seuss
Anyways, great track, i love how you tried to make it a story, but it's too bad it corrupted eh? ;o I don't see much tracks that aren't super black or super compacted scenery these days. +rep.
Anyways, great track, i love how you tried to make it a story, but it's too bad it corrupted eh? ;o I don't see much tracks that aren't super black or super compacted scenery these days. +rep.
linerage- Member
Re: Save The Princess - Sssschiller
The speed was fitting very well to the song imo Apart from that I usually don't like the "real speed" recording because it seems unnatural to me..
However, amazing scenery! I like the way you make draw some stuff that I don't realize on first sight
Hope you'll keep going man, you're awesome!
However, amazing scenery! I like the way you make draw some stuff that I don't realize on first sight
Hope you'll keep going man, you're awesome!
Georgio_jc- Line Rider Legend
Re: Save The Princess - Sssschiller
wow o.O why have I not seen this yet?
That was pretty amazing dude! I really loved how everything kind of looked like it all fit together into one unique piece of art. Most of the scenery was the same but it all works together. The mountains in the background = a brilliant touch. I really liked this, very nice art. The end was a little OMG but it was awesome haha. Excellent job, I hope you'll do more!
That was pretty amazing dude! I really loved how everything kind of looked like it all fit together into one unique piece of art. Most of the scenery was the same but it all works together. The mountains in the background = a brilliant touch. I really liked this, very nice art. The end was a little OMG but it was awesome haha. Excellent job, I hope you'll do more!
Wizzy- Member
Re: Save The Princess - Sssschiller
Damn son. This is awesome. Not really sure what to say today apart from good effing job!
Painlobster- Member
Re: Save The Princess - Sssschiller
That was just amazing love your granuals by the way
but srsly this track as inspired me so much.
but srsly this track as inspired me so much.
Yobanjojoe- Member
- swag
Re: Save The Princess - Sssschiller
thanks for all the comments, guys =)
it's always cool to read what u liked and disliked about the scening and the track.
@ tigerline: I wanted to put more scenery in the track, but my computer was very laggy with 30000 lines, so i stopped =(
@rafael: yea, i will give the next recording to you u have more talent than me.
@linerage: i have no really inspiration like this Dr.Seuss. I'm just drawing what comes to my mind.
@georg: The idea to show the track with this speedi have from your track phonolite
it's always cool to read what u liked and disliked about the scening and the track.
@ tigerline: I wanted to put more scenery in the track, but my computer was very laggy with 30000 lines, so i stopped =(
@rafael: yea, i will give the next recording to you u have more talent than me.
@linerage: i have no really inspiration like this Dr.Seuss. I'm just drawing what comes to my mind.
@georg: The idea to show the track with this speedi have from your track phonolite
Sssschiller- Member
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