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Flower Duet *Hanuman*

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Post by Hanuman Fri Nov 10, 2017 5:17 pm


Enjoy Very Happy
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Post by theacp127 Fri Nov 10, 2017 6:05 pm

A good little track. There were some interesting things happening.
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Post by Helios Pavonine Sat Nov 11, 2017 10:39 am

Some moments were quite cool, like 1:28! On the other hand some movements (e.g. 0:56) I found too jerky and didn't fit the calmness of the song. But definitely a fun, unique track!
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Post by Apple Sat Nov 11, 2017 12:11 pm

I really liked this track! The syncing was obviously quite good. There were a lot of really good parts. I didn't actually expect Bosh to go through the lines at the beginning so that was cool. I also liked the spinny kramual thing; that was fun. I agree with HP that it could have been a bit smoother, but I can say that about lots and lots of tracks. I'm impressed! Keep it up. I'm excited to see what you have in store for us next.
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Post by Hanuman Sat Nov 11, 2017 2:54 pm

Thanks for the feedback guys I will try to improve smoothness in future. The main aim of this track was to improve on my syncing and generally create something cleaner visually.
These in between tracks keep me interested in LR whilst I slowly work on my main track. The hardest thing about the main project is really motivation, that and the frequent bouts of RSI from drawing and erasing the same thing hundreds of times...
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