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Post by Toivo Fri Jul 14, 2017 3:44 pm

I have been playing this game on and off for really long time, and now decided to publish my first track. Hope you enjoy it : )
Any comments or feedback are welcome!



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Post by Opal Rider Fri Jul 14, 2017 4:01 pm

The first part was interesting to me. Usually with uber compact styles people would manipulate bosh using very strong, individual gravity wells. You seem to have turned that on its head and went for quirky curves instead. It's an interesting choice, and I'd be curious to see the functional and creative uses of the style in the future. The rest of it was really good as well for a first release. There are a few moments such as at :58 where I'm curious as to the purpose of the dots. Are those put in place to recycle the curve or are they acting as gravity wells for the second peg?
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Post by Toivo Fri Jul 14, 2017 4:06 pm

Thanks! I made those lines to make Bosh go faster. If I remember correctly Bosh lost speed every frame whitout those extra lines.

Edit: Or if you mean the lines that turns Bosh, I just wanted him to turn as fast as possible.

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Post by Chuggers Fri Jul 14, 2017 4:12 pm

damn dude that was really entertaining, the music and track worked to create a lot of tension there

the last half reminded me a lot of scg, really flowy stuff you got
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Post by Toivo Fri Jul 14, 2017 4:21 pm

Thank you, Chuggers! : )

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Post by Sheldon Fri Jul 14, 2017 5:10 pm

That was suspenseful and intense. You clearly have talent my man. Some of those butt chains were crazy strong, fun watch would watch again.
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Post by Toivo Sat Jul 15, 2017 12:27 pm

Thanks Sheldon! Glad to hear you liked it Smile

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