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Post by Camtheman3245 on Mon Aug 29, 2016 2:14 pm



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This is my first track since being back, and also the first track I'm genuinely proud to have made.
Constructive criticism is ENCOURAGED!

Shoutouts to Orthuss for recording.

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Re: Noodles

Post by Wizzy on Mon Aug 29, 2016 2:29 pm


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Post by Sheldon on Mon Aug 29, 2016 2:51 pm

Very good, as good as old school can be I suppose. Lol xD
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Post by Apple on Mon Aug 29, 2016 6:06 pm

Welcome back!

I liked it! Especially the parts where you threw bosh through most of what you already had made. Really fun track. Love the song.

If you're looking for some constructive criticism, maybe a little less jerkiness in the slow parts? It wasn't bad at all, but it could have been a little smoother I think.

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Post by Lukking on Mon Aug 29, 2016 6:23 pm

I like the foot-grolls and the manuals. work on variety and try to develop your own style

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Post by theacp127 on Mon Aug 29, 2016 11:02 pm

I fell like you stole this from me. This looks just like a track I would make. I felt that the track was solid over all. You have a good grasp on the basics of flings and smooth manuals. With these tools you can create very specific kinds of tracks to go with a theme or whatever a creative mind can come up with. Hope to see other stuff from you. I'll stop by the twitch stream if you happen to stream while I'm not actually working on homework.

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Post by OTDE on Mon Aug 29, 2016 11:05 pm

This reminds me of middle-of-his-career IGLima. Neat stuff!

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Re: Noodles

Post by Camtheman3245 on Tue Aug 30, 2016 12:06 pm

Wizzy wrote:
lmao what

Sheldon wrote:Very good, as good as old school can be I suppose. Lol xD
Thanks!
haha xD meme

Apple wrote:Welcome back!

I liked it! Especially the parts where you threw bosh through most of what you already had made. Really fun track. Love the song.

If you're looking for some constructive criticism, maybe a little less jerkiness in the slow parts? It wasn't bad at all, but it could have been a little smoother I think.
Thanks! Will take that point into account.

Lukking wrote:I like the foot-grolls and the manuals. work on variety and try to develop your own style
I like old-school, so that's where I'm looking to go. Thanks for the tip  Thumbs Up

theacp127 wrote:I fell like you stole this from me. This looks just like a track I would make. I felt that the track was solid over all. You have a good grasp on the basics of flings and smooth manuals. With these tools you can create very specific kinds of tracks to go with a theme or whatever a creative mind can come up with. Hope to see other stuff from you. I'll stop by the twitch stream if you happen to stream while I'm not actually working on homework.
The more the merrier.

OTDE wrote:This reminds me of middle-of-his-career IGLima. Neat stuff!
I didn't know of that rider before, maybe a tad after I left. Thanks a lot!

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Post by Opal Rider on Tue Aug 30, 2016 6:59 pm

Totes old school feel, I thought for sure you were ZNF going back to his routes.

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Re: Noodles

Post by Camtheman3245 on Sat Sep 17, 2016 2:44 pm

Opal Rider wrote:Totes old school feel, I thought for sure you were ZNF going back to his routes.
Just realized I never replied to this.
Thanks! I watched an interview Rabid did with ZNF tonight actually and we share a lot of the same methods of making tracks, such as thinking of throwing Bosh back into track as a challenge to get him out.
That's no coincidence, by the way. I was the same as every other rider in 2007/2008 after seeing his tracks. Just so happens I thought of his style in similar ways that he did.

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