Haiku - Cocopops

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Haiku - Cocopops

Post by Cocopops on Sun May 22, 2016 10:24 am

Hi there,

I am releasing a new track today to the sound of Headphone Activist :



I know the ending may seem rough but I lost inspiration to continue this track but wanted to release it anyway.

PS : I know it can look like the beginning of The Bee and the Dragonfly from Apple, even though I do not claim to have his skills and his attempt at this type of track will surely be 100000x times better.
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Post by Apple on Sun May 22, 2016 10:46 am

Wow. I know it was short, but I really liked it. The very beginning was just so nice and relaxing. Gives a good vibe. I loved when the drums came in, too. I didn't expect it at all, and the part with the nose manual line that grew I thought was really well done. Totally thought it was actually going sideways. Flipping it to a tail manual was a really nice touch.

I liked it a lot. Keep doing what you're doing because I'd love to see more tracks from you.
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Post by rabid squirrel on Sun May 22, 2016 11:21 am

Pretty much exactly what shua said. Love this track man! I am newly excited to see what you do next Very Happy

I'm excited to see all the people discovering that highspeed can be super chill if executed the right way.

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Post by Z_N-Freak on Sun May 22, 2016 5:39 pm

Wow, was totally blown away when the drum kicked in. Felt that nice chill go down my spine. Nice one!

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Re: Haiku - Cocopops

Post by Cocopops on Mon May 23, 2016 5:31 pm

Wow thanks for the positive feedback guys !

10 seconds into the next track, trying to keep the same chill sync vibe...
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Re: Haiku - Cocopops

Post by Chuggers on Mon May 23, 2016 5:36 pm

the sudden ending scared me, it was so sudden

i like the sync, it could have used a little more overall structure but thats just what i think
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Post by JealousCloud on Thu May 26, 2016 12:50 am

I really enjoyed this and would have loved to see it be a bit longer, or at least have a less abrupt ending. You really built a good structure but didn't follow all the way through.

Great track man, can't wait for your next.

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