Fast2Man ~Min3rl3g4nd

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Fast2Man ~Min3rl3g4nd

Post by Min3rl3g4nd on Sat Apr 02, 2016 4:55 pm

My sequel to Fastman and it's faster. EDIT: In my opinion, this is my masterpiece. Thumbs Up



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Post by Lukking on Sat Apr 02, 2016 5:53 pm

That Rovan0 ending ^^

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Post by Opal Rider on Sat Apr 02, 2016 7:30 pm

Yee, super fast man! I really want the next sequel to be three and a half fast men.

I can definitely see your improvement on this one, like a lot. But I'm going to pose a challenge to you for your next one. See how smooth you can get your curves. Take your time on them, plan them out, and get rid of the bumpities. Not all of them were terrible in this, but there were still places in the track like around :13, :16, and :23 where you can feel Bosh being jostled around. (Keep in mind I didn't use the word circular. Not all curves have to be a circle, unless you really want them to be.)

That said, the only direction practice can take you is up, so keep working at it.

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