Kenopsia

First track in 69 years

Full image: https://2img.net/h/i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/22bazooka/5_zpsh2vmekqd.png

link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OxlDjZ6JVrQ

That sun is fabulous

That was really something. The manuals were smooth and the scenery was crisp. The only thing I noticed as that it was a bit fast and hard to see at points, but that's about it.

That was a pretty little track! More on this later

Dude this scenery was so fucking awesome. Its been so long since ive seen a scenery track or a track in general amazing

Once I get home or acquire headphones I will watch the shit out of this. Srsly. Can't wait. Stand by for further notice.

I think this is a great piece of art. didnt like the sun too much but i loved the rest. srsly you could become the next cc or lrg imo!

The sun was banging hot, but I feel like it didn’t quite hit the mark. My first thoughts: Playground devoured by black hole. Which I choose to interpret as lost childhood alternatively: growing up too fast. Or, you know, it was pretty or whatever.

I thoroughly enjoyed this. The art style is remarkable and is drawn upon a charming track. Overall a sexy piece of ass, 10/10 would bang.

I am super happy to see another scenery track, and even more excited that it was made in LRA with 25,000 lines and no noticeable lag!

I really really hope to see more from you (especially since the last solo scenery track release from anyone was a track I released 6 months ago). I'm always happy to do your recordings.

I'm gonna bust out my old scenery critique and jump straight in because I don't have a whole lot else to say about this track up front.

Ambitious? Somewhat - 25k is a lot of lines but you wouldn't guess it from the video
Epic factor/Impressive? More of a nice cup of coffee than a mindblowing explosion
Complete/Cohesive? YES
Vision? Yes, - I'm glad it was clear where the horizon was, it gave a nice sense of place to the whole track.
An Experience? - Yeah, first scenery track in a long time that it was really easy to feel that you were in a world/environment

Quality of art? Great! I have to comment on the sun though. I thought it was really well drawn but didn't quite fit the art style of the rest of the track. I loved the tree and the vines.
Creativity in scening things? Alright. Lots of rails, but I loved the flings and the ending, which was super imaginative
Speed manipulations? None but it wouldn't have fit the track I don't think
Detail? Great. Thorough. Not overdone though.
Consistency? Fabulous
Unified Theme? Great. But a bit generic. I hope to see you trying your hand at different themes and styles in the future.
Originality? Okay. The ending was great. Rails/grass/water, not so much.
Speed? Maybe a little fast. Which is weird because it probably seemed super slow when you were making it but scenery requires some really slow speeds when you have lots of detail (I usually make fast sections more homogenous for this reason, personally)

Monument placement? Not really any monuments unless you count the sun and ending. Which is actually totally fine and great IMO.
Monument usage? N/A
3-D (extrusion, adding shine, shading, contour lines, adding depth)?Nice depth, though I thought it could be more pronounced between grass -> water -> sky and came off looking a bit flat. Stylistically it all came off as a bit flat (as in, it didn't look 3D) with the way it was shaded. I do like the flatness of the style but work on this so you're able to make things pop out at the viewer if you want to.
Made sense? There was one tentacle/vine thing (not sure what it was) that I wished he rode on the outside rather the inside of it. Otherwise, great job.
"Hiding" the track? (this is bad) I can't decide if the sun with the line through it was good or bad. Otherwise, nothing that I saw.
Good Ending? I loved how it wasn't epic but it was cool and creative.

I'm reminded a lot of Sorvius's, CC, and LRG, who are all good people to be compared to Next steps advice: Look into how CC uses white space, how Gjert makes stuff look 3D, and how sorvius makes abstract stuff (and what works and doesn't work in all of these things). OH and Gjert and CC's monuments

GREAT TRACK!!!!!! KEEP GOING!!!!!!!

I like how chill this track is and personally really like the sun/moon. Looks really cool

woo thanks guys!

honestly I had so much trouble trying to figure out how to scene that one straight line, so the sun was a last resort, but I kinda like it now

It's always nice to see scenery. Really nice track. I thought the song went well with the track. Liked it a lot.

I really like this track. You instantly got me biased when you used a piano cover of Where Is My Mind. It instantly set the tone to me. And I felt the sun totally fit with that, which was truly beautiful in my humble opinion. please keep making tracks. I really like the quality of what you're putting out here and would love to see more.

Well if banjo can make another track, I guess I can too

Dapianokid wrote:Well if banjo can make another track, I guess I can too

Lovely lines, bruh

I added a full image of the track for anyone interested

Yobanjojoe wrote:I added a full image of the track for anyone interested

ooh pretty