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Post by theacp127 on Fri Jun 12, 2015 7:11 pm

I think this track is far above my last track. I've really started to understand the technically advanced things possible. This is what I was able to do over 3 months of learning after my last track. Hope you enjoy. https://youtu.be/WlAmUf6TaU0
I'm sorry Lukking and Orthuss. It's blocked in Germany, but use this to see it http://en.savefrom.net/

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Post by OTDE on Fri Jun 12, 2015 8:27 pm

I liked it! there were some places where the rotation and transitions weren't as snappy as they could be (or should be, given the song choice), but you're definitely learning lots about fling quirk and have nowhere to go but up from here. Kudos! Thumbs Up

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Post by efrazable on Fri Jun 12, 2015 8:58 pm

damn tho

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Post by roflmaoqwerty on Sat Jun 13, 2015 9:07 am

While there might've been some real sour flowkillers in there, this track was overall a HUGE improvement on your part and actually a lot of fun to watch. I could almost see how you developed your mastery of simple flings (especially nose, hand, inv. hand) over the course of the track; keep refining these and try to integrate some new tricks into your repertoire, and you'll definitely have what it takes to churn out a solid fling quirk (not that this wasn't one).

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Post by Lukking on Sat Jun 13, 2015 9:41 am

Awesome track.You have got a really good and versatile skill set. Try and go all out on creativity now.

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Post by theacp127 on Sat Jun 13, 2015 2:11 pm

Thanks guys. If you could point out specifically which places could be more smooth that would be great. I don't really have an eye for it yet so it's hard for me to visualize which spots need work.

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Re: My Demons ~theacp127

Post by rabid squirrel on Sun Jul 12, 2015 4:15 pm

I have some recommended viewing for you, my friend! I'm picking these because they are close to your current skill level but also much more praised, much more influential, and most would agree more fun to watch overall.

Vision by H4M: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bEFqjabNZcU
I know this is the track with the alt flings 2.0, but more important than that, pay attention to how H4M uses rotation. He's a master. Also, notice how one fling flows into another really well. Also, notice how every time the speed changes it feels highly intentional.

Valance by Sheldon: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gidDBzE3Aes
Again, rotation and transitions, but also look at the aesthetics of the lines and how clean it all is. Also, notice how he milks some of the flings for a long time and it gives the impression that Bosh is somehow frozen in space. Cool right?

Explosivo by Cereal: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q9TfWFVwLzM
The important thing is here is the different types of fling combinations Cereal uses to create tension - power isn't key, what's key is how Bosh is vibrating and stuff.

Supersonic Motion by Rafael: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YPS3SZ81lPk
If you look at the quirk in this track, most of it isn't actually all that technically insane. You're pretty much on par with it by now. But what Raf does really well is he combines master of all these things - rotation, transitions, aesthetics, suspension, and tension and the result is a really amazing track. Also it's super fast and has music syncing.


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Post by theacp127 on Sun Jul 12, 2015 4:21 pm

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Thanks. I especially love vision; I even have the mp4 with the original audio saved on my hard drive to watch it anytime. It's probably one of the biggest influences along with Rafael's heart attack (the track). I'll watch these over a few more times and work out how and why certain things work.

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Re: My Demons ~theacp127

Post by rabid squirrel on Sun Jul 12, 2015 8:52 pm

Whoops I never actually finished the post

I was going to say at the end:
You have a good grasp of the technical stuff of fling quirk and that's pretty clear in this track, but the next thing to work on IMO would be this stuff. Unless of course you want to go all Kramwood and delve way further into the technical stuff, but I would suggest working on this stuff.

But glad it was helpful!

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