Jazzy Jazz = Opal + Pawel

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Jazzy Jazz = Opal + Pawel

Post by Opal Rider on Sat Feb 21, 2015 12:51 am

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sdndXWi6-cw&feature=youtu.be

I'm not really sure what happened to the recording. I was trying out OBS, and some stuff must've happened with it, I'm not really sure what. Oh well, most of the jumps are on the colored recording anyways.

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Post by Yobanjojoe on Sat Feb 21, 2015 1:18 am

I wish this was longer!!!

this was so fun to watch, your parts were very similar and very playful

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Post by Chuggers on Sat Feb 21, 2015 1:36 am

I love these types of song covers, and it really fit the track

Also, work on your guyses flow and rotation, theres a lot of points where bosh could have stopped and gone much smoother and more fittingly.
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Post by Opal Rider on Sat Feb 21, 2015 1:56 am

Chuggers wrote:
Also, work on your guyses flow,

First time I've honestly been told that, but I know pretty much every part that you mean, and completely agree with you. There were a lot of times I sacrificed the flow for doing something cool with this, and it didn't always work out for the better.

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Post by Lukking on Sat Feb 21, 2015 4:07 am

Loved it !
Really smooth actually. Some moments where i was like thats creative as fuck 8D

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Post by Orthuss on Sat Feb 21, 2015 10:51 am

Really darn good. Do agree with Chugs about the flow thing, but I really loved the funky creative moments. That big straight leftwards line, that dealwithit.gif, those 3 manuals connected with green lines, that green manual in the end... They just made the track a joy to watch. Space usage in those compact sections was on point, too.

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Post by Rafael on Sat Feb 21, 2015 11:14 am

So much creativity in this, love it! Favourite moment was the playful flatsledding with the rolls afterwards. Also, awesome song is awesome. Btw, did you intentionally not show who made what? Because I'm pretty sure who made what anyway Hehe
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Post by Opal Rider on Sat Feb 21, 2015 1:34 pm

Rafael wrote:Btw, did you intentionally not show who made what?

Not really, no. I just got bored of editing.

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Post by Pawel3 on Sat Feb 21, 2015 3:36 pm

A question to sceners: how did I do on the sax monument?

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Post by theacp127 on Sat Feb 21, 2015 3:55 pm

Pawel3 wrote:A question to sceners: how did I do on the sax monument?
It's a bit disproportionate, but I didn't notice anything wrong until I looked at it closer.

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Post by theacp127 on Sat Feb 21, 2015 3:57 pm

I liked the track a bunch. The creativity and smoothness were really nice. I would like to see a re-edited version that is a bit higher quality though. If you want, I can do the re-editing to make it look nicer.

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Post by Chuggers on Sat Feb 21, 2015 4:17 pm

Pawel3 wrote:A question to sceners: how did I do on the sax monument?

i actually forgot to praise it ni my review, I loved it and the style it was drawn in
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Post by Opal Rider on Sat Feb 21, 2015 5:31 pm

theacp127 wrote: If you want, I can do the re-editing to make it look nicer.

I mean,, you could? The editing didn't really bother me as much as the recording did, and that's because I tried something new before saying screw it. So my fault on that one, if you want to record it again I'd gladly send you the .sol.

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Re: Jazzy Jazz = Opal + Pawel

Post by theacp127 on Sat Feb 21, 2015 5:34 pm

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theacp127 wrote: If you want, I can do the re-editing to make it look nicer.

I mean,, you could? The editing didn't really bother me as much as the recording did, and that's because I tried something new before saying screw it. So my fault on that one, if you want to record it again I'd gladly send you the .sol.
Sure, just PM it and I can have it recorded in about 2 hours.

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Re: Jazzy Jazz = Opal + Pawel

Post by rabid squirrel on Sat Apr 18, 2015 4:58 pm

I never actually reviewed this. Not a whole lot of stuff to say but I do want to throw my opinion into the mix on this one.

This track was super fun to watch! Like, not as a generic compliment but as like, I actually thoroughly enjoyed watching. The misdirection at the beginning was mildly enjoyable but the first moment I really enjoyed was the sync at 0:35-0:39, it fits so well and I was not expecting it at all, it was kind of like I didn't think it was going to fit while it was happening but it did and it made me laugh (not sure if it was just a good song choice or half-planned syncing). I also really enjoyed 0:42 and 0:46, but when the track really seemed to pick up for me was at 0:52, there through 1:06 was super groovy and fun. I wish the whole track had the vibe of that bit - and I especially liked the bits at 0:58 and 1:03. Then I felt like it lost a bit more steam until the end but I did enjoy finding out that that tail manual was actually green, hah.

I wish I knew who made what because your styles blend really well and I have no idea! But I do hope to see more stuff like this from both of you.

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