Stop signs- theacp127
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Stop signs- theacp127
I finished this track and it just happened to sync pretty well to this song so I went ahead and made the video. It's nothing special but I had already finished it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sSodaghHYfs
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sSodaghHYfs
theacp127- Member
- trying real hard
Re: Stop signs- theacp127
Dat one frame kramual stole my heart <3
This is such minimal and wonderful quirk. Them manuals are pretty shanzzy too.
I wanna see more!
This is such minimal and wonderful quirk. Them manuals are pretty shanzzy too.
I wanna see more!
ScrungleBlumpkus- Member
- Interior Crocodile Alligator
Re: Stop signs- theacp127
Cool track. Something I want to point out though, I seems like you tried to do a kramual 2-3 times before you actually got it. (:40, 1:04). Is that the case?
Either way, I enjoyed it.
Either way, I enjoyed it.
Inukaza- Member
Re: Stop signs- theacp127
I like your manual part.
Reason i dont like the quirk part so much was the flow.
Try to work on that
Reason i dont like the quirk part so much was the flow.
Try to work on that
Lukking- Member
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Re: Stop signs- theacp127
the flow was kinda rusty at some points and the stacked wells didn't really look good, but overall, that is an awesome track :3
Pawel3- Member
Re: Stop signs- theacp127
Three little things:
1) Delete lines under your stacks. When it's ugly enough to bug me, it's a problem.
2) Every single kramual in there was a total flowkiller; you've certainly shown that you can pull them off, but a cool trick should never detract from the aesthetic value of the track as a whole, let alone repeatedly.
3) Balance*
That said, this was by far the best I've seen from you. You're getting very creative with direction, and the unpredictability of this track was quite entertaining; now it's just the little nuances like flow and rotation that you've got to work out, and I can tell that you're getting those down as well. Excited to see more!
1) Delete lines under your stacks. When it's ugly enough to bug me, it's a problem.
2) Every single kramual in there was a total flowkiller; you've certainly shown that you can pull them off, but a cool trick should never detract from the aesthetic value of the track as a whole, let alone repeatedly.
3) Balance*
That said, this was by far the best I've seen from you. You're getting very creative with direction, and the unpredictability of this track was quite entertaining; now it's just the little nuances like flow and rotation that you've got to work out, and I can tell that you're getting those down as well. Excited to see more!
Re: Stop signs- theacp127
It seems that the general opinion is that I need to work on flow the most. I'll make sure my next track is better on that aspect. Thanks the comments guys, I couldn't get better without them.
theacp127- Member
- trying real hard
Re: Stop signs- theacp127
You're certainly getting a lot better, even during this track I noticed how your flings got gradually stronger up to the end. Your flow is actually turning out pretty good, with less awkward sections than I could count on one hand. Your manuals could use a bit more pressure, but they seemed pretty good regardless (I kind of thought they were all blue tbh). I have a feeling your going to end up being like the rest of us that came out of 2012 (Gao, Rofl, and me) and suddenly release a huge mindblowing track out of nowhere and surprise everyone soon. Keep at it
Fauxfyre- Member
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Re: Stop signs- theacp127
I like how you experiment with unconventional moves! Keep doing that, I enjoyed it a lot
Rafael- Line Rider Legend
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