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Post by Getthim on Wed Aug 27, 2014 6:46 am

the third and final track

thanks to rabid for recording



Thank you xD

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Re: Feel good

Post by gaoyubao on Wed Aug 27, 2014 8:24 am

Why do I feel like your manuals are smoother than mine? But really, good job with those smooth barrel rolls. One suggestion, though, which you should readily disregard, is that recycling a manual as flatsled, especially slow flatsled, kind of kills to flow. Ignore that last sentence.

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Re: Feel good

Post by Opal Rider on Wed Aug 27, 2014 10:13 am

Some of the recycles did kill the flow, yeah, although I think that's more because of the hard landing that occurred every time you tried. You sort of threw him at the old line in some places. The barrel rolls were surprisingly smooth though, even when you had him going uphill with almost no speed what-so-ever, which gave the track an almost 0 gravity feel.

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Re: Feel good

Post by [senpai] kevans on Wed Aug 27, 2014 11:20 am

Slick on some parts, rough on others.
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Re: Feel good

Post by Getthim on Wed Aug 27, 2014 11:34 am

yer i do see the rough recycles but i couldn't find anywhere else to go when i got there so...

all coments are happily recieved, thanks very much xD

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Re: Feel good

Post by efrazable on Wed Aug 27, 2014 1:25 pm

funny that this track and Opal/Ph0enix's omni had the same music AND some sick awesome barrel rolling

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DnTB8jJrLQI

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Re: Feel good

Post by Guest on Wed Aug 27, 2014 2:11 pm

@[senpai] kevans wrote:Slick on some parts, rough on others.

@efrazable wrote:funny that this track and Opal/Ph0enix's omni had the same music AND some sick awesome barrel rolling

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DnTB8jJrLQI

these were my thoughts exactly.

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Re: Feel good

Post by Getthim on Wed Aug 27, 2014 3:26 pm

this is the track that i made when opall challenged me to to make as many barrel rolls as i can, of course i could do more but i wanted a watchable length track

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Re: Feel good

Post by Fauxfyre on Wed Aug 27, 2014 6:00 pm

Unlike your other tracks, I don't feel like you added much interesting to compensate for your beginner level style. All of it felt slow and awkward

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Re: Feel good

Post by Guest on Wed Aug 27, 2014 10:36 pm

^ lol I actually like this one better than his others xD

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Re: Feel good

Post by rabid squirrel on Thu Aug 28, 2014 12:17 am

Kramwood wrote:^ lol I actually like this one better than his others xD
same

this one was much smoother and I felt it was more entertaining

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Re: Feel good

Post by ScrungleBlumpkus on Sat Sep 06, 2014 8:14 pm

I liked this one the best. I'm shocked at your epic manuals.

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